Read all your sections so far. Great work. I believe there is something missing from your story thus far but cannot for the life of me pinpoint what that might be. You are an amazing writer! I wish I had your talent and patience for writing. ✌🏻❤️
First, thank you for reading! Second, you're absolutely right. I'm convinced that the elusive voice is the major missing piece. Fortunately, it has emerged in later chapters. Thanks to an idea from another reader (Thanks, Paco!) I'm on my way to giving the narrator even more life. There are other things like consistency and layering that I'll add in the next revision passes that will bring it all together. I think of those additions like adding that little bitty teaspoon of vanilla to so many recipes. It doesn't make up the bulk of any dough or batter, but without it, you just know something is missing!
Read all your sections so far. Great work. I believe there is something missing from your story thus far but cannot for the life of me pinpoint what that might be. You are an amazing writer! I wish I had your talent and patience for writing. ✌🏻❤️
First, thank you for reading! Second, you're absolutely right. I'm convinced that the elusive voice is the major missing piece. Fortunately, it has emerged in later chapters. Thanks to an idea from another reader (Thanks, Paco!) I'm on my way to giving the narrator even more life. There are other things like consistency and layering that I'll add in the next revision passes that will bring it all together. I think of those additions like adding that little bitty teaspoon of vanilla to so many recipes. It doesn't make up the bulk of any dough or batter, but without it, you just know something is missing!